1、成人高考专升本英语作文写作要点分析短文写作总分25分。短文写作部分要求考生写出一篇100-120字左右的短文。题材以记叙文为主，试卷可能给出题目或规定情景或段首句。短文写作的要求为：能够正确表达思想，意义连贯，无重大语言错误。写作内容涉及生活，一般常识和私人信件。短文写作中的题目我们也可以称作命题写作。情景写作也就是便条写作。段首句式的写作可以称为主题句式的写作。一、英语写作训练的要点英语写作最重要的一点是用英语思维进行写作。通病：习惯于先把作文翻译成汉语，然后逐字翻译成英语。在理解和使用英语词汇时，要注意英语和汉语在意义上的不同。所以我们在从事英语写作训练的时候：1.要明确英语写作的意义。2
2、.要学习和掌握必要的写作理论。3.要通过大量的阅读，新概念第二册比较适合。写提纲的好处：1.可以扩大思路2.可以按次序排好素材3.将文章分成段4.明确写作的中心思想“The Advantages of Travel (旅行的益处。)”根据这一题目，在构思时可能会想到以下内容：1.seeing strange and different things (看到各种奇异的东西)2.meeting people with different interests (遇到有各种不同兴趣的人)3.keeping us fit and healthy (有助于身体健康)4.enjoying beautiful
3、 scenery (欣赏各地美景)5.understanding how people live (了解人们怎样生活)6.visiting famous cities and scenic spots (浏览名城和名胜)7.tasting different foods and local flavors (品尝各地风味)8. getting ideas of the conditions and customs of other people（了解各地风土人情)9.arousing the fervent love for our motherland (激起对祖国的热爱)10.gaing
4、knowledge of geography and history (获得地理历史知识)11.making one less narrow minded (使人心胸开阔)12.gaing other knowledge (获得其他方面知识)13.seeing places read of in books (目睹曾在书上读到过的地方)The Advantages of Travel Travel is beneficial to us in at least three ways.First，by traveling we can enjoy the beautiful scenery in
5、 different places. We will see with our own eyes many places read of in books，and visit some famous cities and scenic spots.Second，we will meet people with different interests and see strange and different things when we travel. We can get ideas of the conditions and customs of other people，taste di
6、fferent foods and local flavors if we like. In this way，we can understand how differently other people live.Third，travel will not only help us to gain knowledge of geography and history and other knowledge，which arouses the fervent love for our motherland，but will also help us keep healthy and make
7、us less narrow-minded. Travel does benefit us both mentally and physically. 在写100字左右的作文，我们也强调三段论。第一句话或第一段我们强调我们要写的内容，第二段找一些例子阐述一下。第三段再次把我们强调的内容引申的说一下。二文章的三个部分引言introduction 正文body 结束语conclusion 专升本英语作文考试中，语法一定要简明扼要，而且要正确。写好主题句的三条原则1.要能说明段落中心思想的内容。2.要有能体现中心思想的关键词。3.尽量使用简洁明了的句子。以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句
8、式，每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的12个，做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。1表示原因1）There are three reasons for this2）The reasons for this are as follows3）The reason for this is obvious4）The reason for this is not far to seek5）The reason for this is that6）We have good reason to believe that例如：There are three reasons for the ch
9、anges that have taken place in our lifeFirstly，peoples living standard has been greatly improvedSecondly，most people are well paid，and they can afford what they need or likeLast but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life如写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如：Great changes have taken place in o
10、ur lifeThere are three reasons for this这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。2表示好处1）It has the following advantages2）It does us a lot of good3）It benefits us quite a lot4）It is beneficial to us5）It is of great benefit to us例如：Books are like friendsThey can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and wid
11、en our horizonsTherefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us3表示坏处1）It has more disadvantages than advantages2）It does us much harm3）It is harmful to us例如：However，everything divides into twoTelevision can also be harmful to usIt can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too muc
12、h time watching television4表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient，possible）for sbto do sth2）We think it necessary to do sth3）It plays an important role in our life例如： and we have stepped into the Computer Age5表示措施1）We should take some effective measures 3）We should do our u
13、tmost in doing sth4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with例如： measures to solve it.6表示变化1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years 例如：Some changes have taken place in peoples diet in the past five yearsThe major reasons for these changes are not far to seekNowaday
14、s，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins7表示事实、现状1）We cannot ignore the fact that2）No one can deny the fact that3）There is no denying the fact that4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in5）However，thats not
15、the case例如：We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollutionTo solve these problems，we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollutionThe government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment8表示比较1）Compared w
16、ith A，B2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV3）There is a striking contrast between them例如：Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordableFirstly，they do not consume natural resources of petroleumSecondly，they do not cause the pollution problemLast but not least，they co
17、ntribute to peoples health by giving them due physical exercise9表示数量1）It has increased（decreased）fromto2）The population in this city has now increased （decreased）to 800，000 spent on education has increased再如： hours per week in 2008 to 20 hours in 2009.=Practical Writing Samples 英语应用文写作范文1. A Letter
18、of Apology道歉信由于未能及时赴约，给老师写一封道歉信，解释原因请求原谅同时提出希望下一次约会。You have made an appointment with your teacher,but failed to keep it.Write a letter to your teacher to 1) Apologize for your failure to keep the appointment,2) Explain your reason to your teacher, and3) Express your wish to make another appointment
19、.Dear Prof. Wang,Im writing to ask you to excuse me for not being able to keep our appointment. I do know that this is very impolite and must have caused you much trouble.I do reckon that at present any explanation is pale and futile. However I do not want you to misunderstand me. On my way to your
20、office, an old lady suddenly fainted due to heart attack on the bus. I stopped a taxi and sent her into a nearby hospital. I stayed there until her son came, which spoiled our appointment.I am aware that our appointment is of importance. I do hope that you would be kind enough to spare your valuable
21、 to meet me.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely Yours Li Ming 2. A Letter of Thanks感谢信生病住院两周，老师和同学过来看望你，为此你给他们写一封感谢信，表达你的感激之情。You have been ill and hospitalized for two weeks. Your teachers and classmates went to see you.Write a letter to them to 2) Describe your feeling, and3) State
22、your present condition.Dear Teachers and Classmates,First of all, please allow me to say “Thank you”to all of you. It is very kind of you to spare your valuable time not poor and lonely in the world and in fact I am living in a world of love, which has brought me much confidence and These days, my c
23、ondition has been obviously improved due to the careful treatment offered by doctors and nurses. Again, special thanks go to all of you.Sincerely Yours Li Ming3. A Letter of Invitation邀请信春节即将来临，你写信邀请外国朋友来中国过春节。 Chinese Festival together. Write a letter to him/her to 1) Express your warm invitation t
24、o him/her,2) Introduce the Spring Festival, and Dear Beckham, Spring Festival is of much importance to Chinese people. It has a long history and Chinese have attached much importance to the holiday. To be exact, the Spring Festival has been the most significant holiday. The Spring Festival is to Chi
25、nese what Christmas is to the Westerners. traditions.I am looking forward to your reply.Sincerely Yours Li Min 4A Letter of Suggestion 建议信给北京市市长王岐山写信，希望自己能成为2008年奥运会的志愿者，同时提出自己的看法。 Write a latter to Wang Qishan, mayor of the capital city, to 1) Make suggestions for the 2008 preparation work,2) Expre
26、ss your wish to be a volunteer.Dear Wang Qishan, Athens Olympic Games, I can not help writing to you.First of all,here is my suggestion for the preparation work of the 2008Beijing Olympic Games. The construction work must finish our preparation work well and in time.Last but not least important, I w
27、ant to express my wish to be a volunteer. In the first place, it is the duty of every speak English, Russian, and Japanese. Therefore I can be a qualified volunteer.I am looking forward to your reply Sincerely Yours Li Ming5A Letter of Complaint投诉信你新买的电脑出了问题，为此你写信给经理投诉。 you got it back. Write a lett
28、er to the manager: 2) Describing the problems, Dear manager, Theres something wrong with it. That makes me extremely unhappy. that the machine gives no response. And Im so annoyed with it.Its obvious that you didnt carefully examine the machine before you sold it. I think your store should take full
29、 responsibility for selling me the defective machine. I insist that you give me a satisfactory reply. I do want you to give back my money as soon as possible.Sincerely yours,Tom 6A Letter of Job Application 求职信假如你马上要毕业了，现给一个公司的人力资源经理写一封求职信。You will graduate from university and are hunting for a job.
30、 After reading a job ads, write a letter to the Personnel Resources Department to 1) State your reason to write the application,2) describe your relevant education background,3) Introduce your English level, and4) State your way of contact.Dear Sir/Madam,I am responding to your ad in the June 20th,2
31、005,issue of the Sunday Talent Journal for the position of production coordinator. I feel that my background in electronics and manufacturing will fit in well.I will graduate from the Beijing Science &Technology University in June with a Bachelor of Science degree in I passed CET-6 in 2004. Not only do I pay much atten
