1、高考英语复习读后续写语法升级技巧解析版专题16 读后续写：语法升级技巧（解析版）Part1 倒装部分倒装表情绪：So shocked was he that he stood there, open-mouthed. Reluctant as he was, he jumped as told.部分倒装强调动作发生的时间：Not until they heard that she was safe and sound were their minds set at rest.Only when you put your heart on it can things be handled wel
2、l.（句尾升华主题）全部倒装强调主语：At the foot of the mountain beautifully situated our cottage.总结：写景用全部倒装突出画面，用部分倒装突出动作、情绪、时间。一、翻译1.Eric非常着急，使劲敲Adam的门。So anxious was he that he violently knocked at the door of Adams room.2.尽管Ben对她的礼物感到震惊，她还是不情愿地收下了，站在那里低着头。Astonished though/as Ben was at her presents, she received
3、 them unwillingly, standing there and bowing her head.3.虽然Jane很虚弱，她还是挣扎着站起来，继续寻求援助。Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance.4.他人生中从没吃过如此美味的食物。Never in her life had she tasted anything delicious.5.黑暗中传来一个他从没听过的声音。Out of the darkness came a voice he had never hea
4、rd before.6. 他僵硬的脸上有一种恐惧和仇恨的表情。On his rigid face there stood an expression of horror and hatred.7. 沉默之后，响起一阵掌声。A storm of applause came after silence.8.直到那时，Megan才说出困扰她一整天的事情。Not until then did Megan poured out what had been disturbing her the whole day.9. 这就是成功的秘诀多一点点努力，多一点点决心，你就能创造出多一点点的奇迹。Such is
5、 the key to successa little bit more efforts and a little bit more determination will create a little bit more miracle.10.他的脑中闪过了一位英雄战士的形象。Through his mind flashed the image of a heroic fighter.Part2 虚拟语气 用来表示假设，所陈述的是一个条件，不一定是事实。虚拟语气通过谓语动词特殊的形式来表示，常用来表达惊异、惋惜、遗憾、理应如此等含义，在读后续写中表达比较强烈的感情。例：Without., sb
6、 would. / But for., sb would. 没有的话，某人就Wishing., 主语+谓语. /主语+谓语. , wishing. 某人，希望If only. 要是就好了 / 但愿；只要Given one more chance, I would. 如果再给我一次机会，我会一、单句翻译1.如果我没跟Tom吵架、走入森林，我现在就不会被困在这个糟糕的地方了！If I had not quarreled with Tom and gone into the forest, I would not be trapped in the awful place now!2.我多么希望我没
7、跟着那只兔子走进森林啊！How I wished I had not followed the rabbit into the forest!If only I had not followed the rabbit into the forest!3.如果我们中有更多人看重家庭而不是金钱，这个世界就会更美好。If more of us valued family above money, it would be a better world.4. 若非你及时的救援，我早就在大火中被烧死了。Had it not been for your timely rescue, I would have
8、 been burned to death in the big fire. 5.再给我一次机会的话，我再不会以外貌判断一个人。Given one more chance, I would not have judged a person by his appearance.6. 朋友们都在到处跑着，玩得很开心，可Susan却独自坐在草坪上，希望自己此刻在家里。The companions were running, excited, but Susan sat alone on the grass, whishing she were at home this moment.7. 如果我是E
9、ric，我会毫不犹豫地拒绝这个无理的请求。Were I Eric, I would have refused the unreasonable requirement without hesitation.二、情景写作（用4-5句话描述以下情景,至少三句虚拟语气，注意不是翻译）。Alex没听妈妈关于洞穴的劝告，被困在黑漆漆的洞里，又害怕又后悔。 Suggested answer: 被困在这个黑漆漆的吓人的洞里, Alex害怕又后悔。要是他听妈妈关于这个洞穴的警告就好了 (if only) ！他泪流满面，多希望带了手机在身边(wish)! 如果现在有个朋友和他在一起，他也不会这么害怕了。 Tra
10、pped in the black scaring cave, Alex was filled with fright and regret. If only he had listened to Mums warning about it! He wept his eyes out, wishing he had brought his mobile phone with him! If he had a friend with him now, he would not be so frightened.模拟演练01读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。A f
11、ew years ago, I had taken a part-time holiday-season job in a videostoreat the local shopping mall. From inside the store, Id begun to see the people rushing by outside. Then anelderly womancaught my eye. Although slow and unsure of step, she moved with deliberation (从容), and there was no hesitation
12、 in her gestures. The elderly woman had come into the store along with a younger woman who I guessed was her daughter.The daughterwas clearlyimpatient, rolling her eyes, huffing（长吁短叹）and sighing, checking her watch every few seconds.The older woman thenseparatedfrom the younger one and began to tick
13、 through the DVDs on the nearest shelf, obviouslyexpectingsomeone else to help. After the slightest hesitation, I walked over and asked if I could help her find something. The woman smiled up at me and showed me a title scrawled (乱涂乱画的) on a piece of paper. It was a bit unclear to make out. Clearly
14、a person looking for it knew a little about movies, about quality. Rather thanrushingoff to locate the DVD for the woman, I asked her to walk with me so I could show her where she could find it.Looking back, I think I wanted to enjoy her company for amoment. Something about her deliberate movements
15、reminded me of my ownmother, whod passed away the previous Christmas. As we walked along the back of the store, I introduced her to the different sections: old television shows, action movies, cartoons, science fiction. The woman seemed glad of the unrushedcompanyand casual conversation.We found the
16、 movie, and I complimented her on her choice. Shesmiledand told me it was one shed enjoyed when she was her daughters age and that she hoped she would enjoy it as much as she had. Maybe, she said with a hint of wistfulness（一丝渴望）, her daughter could enjoy it with her own young children. Then, when th
17、e older womans turn in line came, she paid in cash, counting out the dollars and coins with the same sureness shed displayed earlier.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150字左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:As the cashier put the DVD into a plastic bag, I walked over t
18、o the younger woman._Paragraph 2:The elderly woman moved with her deliberate slowness back to her daughter._翻译小练习：1. “那是你妈妈吗？“我问，半路希望她告诉我这不关我的事。_2. 但她转了转眼睛说：“是的。”我笑着告诉她我不是在批评她。_3. “珍惜她，”我说。然后我回答她好奇的表情说：“当她走后，你会想起这样的小瞬间。”_4. 这是真的。我仍然想念我的母亲，想起了那些让她生活悲惨的不耐烦的时刻。_5. 他们一起向音像店的出口走去。_6. 他们肩并肩地站在那里一会儿，等待着奔腾的
19、假日潮流，等待着他们在其中的位置。_7. 然后，女儿瞥了一眼，片刻间注视着她的母亲。_8. 显然，她用明显不习惯的爱搂着母亲的肩膀，轻轻地把她引回到洪水中。_参考答案：1. “那是你妈妈吗？“我问，半路希望她告诉我这不关我的事。“Is that your mom?” I asked, halfwayexpectingher to tell me it was none of my business. 2. 但她转了转眼睛说：“是的。”我笑着告诉她我不是在批评她。But she rolled her eyes and said, “Yeah.” Ismiledto show her I wasn
20、t criticizing.3. “珍惜她，”我说。然后我回答她好奇的表情说：“当她走后，你会想起这样的小瞬间。” “Cherish her,” I said. And then I answered her curious expression by saying, “When shes gone, its the littlemomentslike this thatll come back to you.” 4. 这是真的。我仍然想念我的母亲，想起了那些让她生活悲惨的不耐烦的时刻。It was true. I missed my mother still and remembered t
21、he moments when I was soimpatientas to make her life miserable.5. 他们一起向音像店的出口走去。Together they made their way toward the exit of the videostore. 6. 他们肩并肩地站在那里一会儿，等待着奔腾的假日潮流，等待着他们在其中的位置。They stood there for a moment, side by side, waiting for therushingholiday current and for their place in it. 7. 然后，
22、女儿瞥了一眼，片刻间注视着她的母亲。Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded hermother. 8. 显然，她用明显不习惯的爱搂着母亲的肩膀，轻轻地把她引回到洪水中。And slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mothers shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge.参考范文：As the cashie
23、r put the DVD into a plastic bag, I walked over to the younger woman. “Is that your mom?” I asked, halfwayexpectingher to tell me it was none of my business. But she rolled her eyes and said, “Yeah.” Ismiledto show her I wasnt criticizing. “Cherish her,” I said. And then I answered her curious expre
24、ssion by saying, “When shes gone, its the littlemomentslike this thatll come back to you.” It was true. I missed my mother still and remembered the moments when I was soimpatientas to make her life miserable.The elderly woman moved with her deliberate slowness back to her daughter. Together they mad
25、e their way toward the exit of the videostore. They stood there for a moment, side by side, waiting for therushingholiday current and for their place in it. Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded hermother. And slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccusto
26、med affection around her mothers shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge.模拟演练02读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Sally had anxiety disorder trouble that made her fail to speak in social situations. Im a nurse and use Bella to help children in my community, to bring them comfort and conf
27、idence the way only a dog can. I thought back to the day when Id first brought Bella to the school.That morning in January, her teacher led us to a room. “Sally hasnt spoken outside her home in two years, she told me. “Her parents have taken her to doctors, but nothing has worked.”A little girlstoodshyly just inside the doorway. Her eyes brightened when she noticed my dog.“This is Bella I said. “She does tricks. Would you like to see?Sally nodded. I motioned with my hand. Bella lay down and then rolled over.
