1、苏教版高考英语真题与模拟类编专题09短文改错含答案2018年高考及最新模拟分类汇编之短文改错2018年高考短文改错【2018全国I】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的次。删除：把多余的用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：(1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；(2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。71. During my last winter holiday,
2、 I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also Iwent h
3、ere again,they had a big separnte house to raise dozens of chicken.They also had a small pond,which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return f
4、or every two years, but he agreed.【答案】During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I a change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and animals. Last winter when I went again, they had a big separate h
5、ouse to raise dozens of . They also had a small pond they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by the fish. I felt that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return every two years, he agreed.【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者在去年寒假期间和父亲去乡
6、下拜访爷爷奶奶过程中的所见所闻，由此讲述了乡下的巨大变化。1. countryside前加the 考查冠词。去年寒假，我和父亲去乡下拜访爷爷奶奶。此处特指去的是乡下，故加定冠词the。2. find改成found 考查动词时态。根据文章中的During my last winter holiday可知，事件发生在过去，故用一个过去时。故将find改成found。3. another改成other 考查形容词的用法。他们住在一个小房子里，院子里有狗、鸭子和其他牲畜。根据句意可知，将another改成other。4. here改成there 考查副词及语意理解。去年冬天我又一次去了那里。故将her
7、e改成there。5. chicken改成chickens 考查名词复数。他们拥有一个大的独立住宅，还养了许多只鸡。根据前文的dozens of可知，其后用名词复数形式。7. sell改成selling 考查动名词。去年夏天他们通过卖鱼挣了一大笔钱。此处介词by后用动名词，故用selling。8. happily改成happy 考查形容词作表语。他们的生活有了很大提高，我感到很高兴。此处形容词作表语，故将happily改成happy。9. 删除for 考查介词的用法。时间名词有every，each，last等词修饰时，其前不用介词。故删除for。10. but改成and 考查并列连词的用法。我
8、计划每两年回来一次，他同意了。此处是并列关系，故将but改成and。点睛：本文中第9处改错是学生容易忽视的考点。时间名词有every，each，last，this，that等词修饰时，其前不用介词。例：We are going to fish this morning.I finished the course last winter holiday.【2018全国II】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：
9、把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：（1）.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；(2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。71. When I was little, Fridays night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked
10、 to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didnt realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned
11、 out to be very useful later in my life.【答案】When I was little, night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all in the sitting room. As kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to them, my parents would not let me. They would say to that play
12、ing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games them sometimes. I didnt realize how right my parents until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life. 第三处：考查冠词。这里表示“作为一个孩子”，a用在表示泛指的单数名词前，the表示特指。故把the改为a。第
13、四处：考查动词不定式。句意：无论我要求多少次要去看（卡通片）。用不定式表示目的。故把watching改为watch。第五处：考查情态动词。would后跟动词原形，故把to删除。第六处：考查代词。句意：他们会对我说玩纸牌有助于大脑。偷换人称代词，是对“我”说，前面提到的I，而不是we。故把us改为me。第七处：考查固定搭配。be unwilling to do sth.意为“不愿意做某事，不情愿做某事”。本文介绍的是过去的情况，故用过去时。所以在unwilling前加was。第八处：考查介词。play the games with sb.表示“和某人一块玩游戏”，故把for改为with。第九处：
14、考查时态。根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般过去时。故把are改为were。第十处：考查宾语从句的连接词。句意：当我是个孩子的时候我父母教给我的纸牌游戏在我日后的生活中证明非常有用。宾语从句连接词并不是表示地点状语，而是时间状语。故把where改为when。点晴：名词作定语与名词所有格作定语的区别。一般来说，名词作定语通常说明被修饰的词的性质，而名词所有格作定语则强调对被修饰的词的所有（权）关系或表示逻辑上的谓语关系。“the Party members（党员）”中，名词定语表示members的性质；“the Partys calls（党的号召）”中，Party具有动作发出者的作用，calls虽然
15、是名词，却具有动作的含义。a student teacher实习教师，a students teacher一位学生的老师。【2018全国III】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。It was Monday morning, and the writ
16、ing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front
17、 of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well. Immediate, I raised my hand.【答案】【解析】本文为记叙文。文章主要介绍了写作课上作者克服恐惧心理主动回答问题的故事。第一处：考查时态构成。根据语境可知，句子用过去完成时，过去完成时的构成是had don
18、e，所以begin要改为begun。第二处：考查非谓语动词。根据句子成分分析，本句有谓语为was，而且没有连词，与主语是主动关系，所以wait 要用非谓语waiting，表伴随。第三处：考查连词。句意：每个人都沉默了，等着看谁会被要求朗读他或她的段落。一次只能叫一个人，男女两者是选择关系，故把and改为or。第四处：考查固定搭配。be eager to do sth渴望做某事，故eager后加to。第五处：考查代词错误。句意：我已经完成了自己的作业。表示“我的”用my不用myself，或改为定冠词the也可以。第六处：考查固定结构。be afraid to do害怕做某事，所以that为多余，
19、删掉。第七处：考查比较级。句意：我不敢在一大群人面前说话。这里没有比较的意思，故把larger改为large。第八处：考查主谓一致。that作主语，谓语动词用第三人称单数includes。第九处：考查名词单复数。错误不是一个，所以要用复数。第十处：考查副词。此处要用副词在句中做状语修饰整个句子，故把immediate改为immediately。【点睛】此题中的难点为非谓语动词的考查，如第二处错误，第五处错误，第二处解答时要分析句子结构，根据句中是否有谓语，连词来判断使用谓语还是非谓语，再根据句子主语everyone，与wait 之间为主动关系，所以要用现在分词。而第五处则主要考查be afra
20、id to do 这一短语。2018高考模拟题【吉林省长春市2018届高三年级四模】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线() 划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。Dear Joy,How are you doing? Here is an exciting news for yo
21、u. There will be an invention competition in our school in the 20th of October. However, there is a rule the participants shall be in a group. But Id like to invite you to be my partners.I know that you have been longed to design a tiny cooler that people can wear around the wrist. I think it will b
22、e a wonderfully idea for the competition. We can make a small air conditioner to controlling the temperature of the wearer.How do you think of my suggestion? Looking forward to you reply.Yours,Zhang Xin【答案】【解析】这是一封邮件。邮件内容是张鑫想邀请Joy做搭档一起参加学校的发明比赛，设计一个小型空调。第一处：考查冠词。news是不可数名词，不可以用不定冠词修饰。所以把冠词an删掉。第二处：考
23、查介词。the 20th of October是具体时间，所以介词用on。第三处：考查关系代词。这是一个定语从句，从句不缺成分，先行词是物，所以用关系代词that。第四处：考查连词。前一句说“有一个规则是参与者应该在一个组中”，后一句说“我想邀请你做我的搭档”，前后句存在因果关系，所以要把But改为So。 第九处：考查疑问代词。固定句型what do you think of.你认为怎么样？所以这里把How改为What。第十处：考查物主代词。名词reply前面应该是形容词性物主代词，所以把you改为your。【湖南省长沙市雅礼中学、河南省实验中学2018届高三联考】短文改错（共10小题;每小题
24、1分，满分10分）51. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Many of us were raised with the saying “Waste not, want not”. None of us, therefore, can compl
25、etely avoid waste in our lives.Any kind of waste was thoughtless, whether we waste our potential talents, our own time, our limited natural resource, our money, or other peoples time. Each of us can become more aware of and careful. The smallest good habits can make the big difference. Its a good fe
26、eling to know in our hearts we are doing our best in a world what is in serious trouble. By focusing on oil, water, paper, food or clothing, we are playing a part in cutting down on waste.We must keep reminding us that it is easier to get into something than it is to get out of it. Actually, severe
27、damage done to our land is fair recent in the history of our evolution. Its time for us to say no to waste so that our grandchildrens children will able to develop well.【答案】【解析】试题分析：本文讲述的是关于生活中的浪费问题及应该采取的措施。1.考查连接副词。句意：我们中的许多人都是这样说的：“不浪费，不需要”。 然而，我们没有人能完全避免生活中的浪费。前后句是一种转折关系，故把therefore改成however。2.考查
28、时态。句意：任何一种浪费都是轻率的，无论我们是在浪费我们的潜能，我们自己的时间，我们有限的自然资源，我们的金钱，还是其他人的时间。这里在讲述一种客观事实，所以句子用一般现在时态，故把was改成is。3. 考查名词复数。句意：任何一种浪费都是轻率的，无论我们是在浪费我们的潜能，我们自己的时间，我们有限的自然资源，我们的金钱，还是其他人的时间。resource（资源），是可数名词，这里要用名词复数形式，故把resource改成resources。4.考查形容词作表语。句意：我们每个人都能变得更加清醒和谨慎。become是连系动词，后面用形容词做表语，故把of去掉。5.考查固定搭配。固定搭配：mak
29、e a big difference产生很大的不同，有很大影响。故把the改成a。 【湖北省襄阳四中2018届高三5月第四次模拟】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删减：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。Hearing a news that the 2022 Winter Ol
30、ympics would be hold in China, I felt very excited. It struck to me how I learned skating when I was a child. At 7, I began to go crazy about skating, like all my friend. At the beginning, it extremely tough for me to keep my balance. I always fall over on the ground, as a result of which I thought
31、I had no talent for skating. So I gradually lost confidence and became impatient. The more impatient I was, the more terrible I did. I was about to give up while my father came to my assistance. Encouraged by her, I restored confidence and stood up again. As I practiced skating, he always created a
32、relaxed atmosphere and put forward some specific advice. Eventually, I made it.【答案】a news 改成 the news hold 改成 held struck to 中去掉 to friend 改成 friendsextremely 前加 was fall 改成 fell terrible 改成 terribly while 改成 whenher 改成 him relaxed 改成 relaxing4.考查名词复数。根据all可知后面的名词用复数形式，故把friend 改成 friends。5.考查谓语动词。句意：刚开始我很难保持我的平衡。tough（困难的），是形容词，句子没有谓语动词，又是指过去的事情，故在extremely 前
