1、人教版英语专题训练 中考英语书面表达12020-2021年人教版英语专题训练 中考英语书面表达1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1书面表达假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。写作要点：1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。（2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。（3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2、2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。4. 至少80词。Dear Billy,Its my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. _Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,Its my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. Ill tell it to you. I am busy preparing for the coming phys
3、ical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I dont do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by do
4、ing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am busy，because I have，Doing exercise can help，So I advise y
5、ou to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。2 诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看
6、电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling很生气，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下：1、简述事件；2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Daming一些建议。注意：1、词数80100；2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名； 4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the prom
7、ise, and they hate people who break their promise. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【答案】The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, an
8、d I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only
9、 led to Linglings anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分
10、析】本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。【详解】首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。【点睛】文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加
11、通顺。3（B）根据要求完成大作文,词数:80-100体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 的短文,应该包含以下要点:1,学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异.2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己.3.男孩参加各项体育运动,希望运动能使自己更强壮.4.女孩也喜欢运动，希望运动使自己减肥和保持健康,苗条.5.你对运动的观点.6.注意:文中不得出现自己的名字和学校的名字7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数.8.参考词语:keep slim （保持苗条）What We Get from SportsStudents in our schoo
12、l have one thing in common an interest in sports._【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have
13、 fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion,
14、 no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【详解】本篇写作主要是谈论自己对运动的观点和看法，应该用一般现在时态，写作要点要包括：1.提出目前学生对运动的不同看法及原因。2.具体分析（多数学生的观点、男生的观点、女生的观点）。3.提出自己对运动的观点。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，特别使用一些亮点词句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增
15、强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。4书面表达初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力很大。就此问题，老师要求你在英语课上做一个以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”为题的报告，谈谈你的做法，与同学分享经验。请根据以下要求写一份发言稿，内容包括：1. 普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试2. 我过去的压力：父母的期望；学习3. 我成功缓解压力的办法及效果；要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；2. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is
16、a serious problem in todays world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _ _【答案】Hello, my classmates! Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may worry
17、about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends. I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less str
18、essed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们针对现在同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better为题，谈谈自己的看法，和同学们分享一下自己的经验。审题可知，文章中应主要包括以下几个内容：首先介绍同学们普遍感到压力这种现象；然后讲述自己过去曾面对的压力；最后介绍自己如何成功缓解压力。题目中只给出了大概的提纲，其中具体的内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力来补充，并用正确的英
19、语表达出来。学生们可以从自身的经历和体会出发，选取生活中常见的场景进行介绍。文章应使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，并变化谓语动词的正确形式。句式结构可以简单句结构为主，这样的句式表达简洁、明了，易于掌握。但为提升作文档次，应穿插使用并列句和复合句，或使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，谈了自己对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象的看法，并分享了自己的经历。短文有如下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，且层次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心话题也很明确。
20、其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，谓语动词形式准确。句式结构以简单句为主，叙述清晰、简洁。也使用了并列句和复合句的结构，如宾语从句、状语从句等。短文中使用了丰富的句式，如Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed ou
21、t so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。5书面表达根据下列表格的提示，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给的所有信息开头已给出，不计入总词数内容要点：过去现在1旧房1高楼2河水肮脏2河水清澈（clean and clear）3步行、骑自行车上班3乘公交车、小汽车上班4道路狭窄（narrow）4街道宽阔（wide），干净整洁5居住条件（livingconditions）差5生活越来越好，环境（environment）越来越舒适6你的感想（写两到三句）Changes in Ou
22、r HometownIn the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were te
23、rrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us
24、 is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think its still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如take place，in our homet
25、own，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。而I think its still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要
26、尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。6书面表达（本题15分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。为了使生活更美好，社会需要正能量（positive energy）。生活中，我们需要他人的帮助，也要学会帮助他人。请你在网上给What would you do?本期节目留言，内容包括：1. 你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法；2. 说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例；3. 呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量。作文要求：1不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。2语句连贯，词数80个左右。 作文的
27、开头已经给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词数。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I sa
28、w a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）【解析】【详解】本文属于话题作文，描述对节目中挺身而出的顾客的
