1、GRE考试作文笔记一、 是非判断类领域相关In the field of science, experts would achieve further conspicuous accomplishments than beginners do.In the realm of arts, however, beginners contributions would dwarf those of experts.In addition to the aforementioned two cases, we would benefit from taking into consideration s
2、ome scenarios, education, for example, in which the significance of beginners and experts contributions are rather conditional. 不矛盾的：Not mutually exclusiveNot contradictoryA superficial conflict between A and B conceals a harmonious relationship between them.同意、反对Appreciate sthGive support to sthSym
3、pathize with sthDo not reserve any approval of sthFail to concede sthOppose to sthMy perspective diverges from sthReserve approval of sth二、 因果类 既要提到原因也要提到结果三、 两种看法类两种都要提及题目同义改写Some people believe that the purpose of education is to free the mind and the spirit. Others believe that formal education t
4、ends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.The debate concerning education, including the role it should assume and consequence deriving from it, has never ceased and even gained further vigor in the current society. Some people emphasize the goal of education to liberate stude
5、nts soul; at the other side of this debate, however, lies other peoples aversion to education since it is believed to impede our thinking. Taking these two views into consideration, I argue that四、 敌方看法类要提到哪些用来反驳你的例子和理由。我的看法我的看法敌方看法：敌方看法+敌方的理由+我对敌方的评价 有些人会反对我，它们认为应该推翻不正义的法律。 他们会举出历史上的一系列以推翻不正义法律为目的的运
6、动、起义或革命。在他们看来，当法律威胁到人们的根本利益时就应该推翻。 提到敌方反对我的具体理由（对应instruction 中的 reasons and/or examples） 但我认为，就算法律威胁到了我们的根本利益，也不代表我们应该推翻这些法律。而面对不正义的法律，我们首先要确认它是对大多数人都不正义，并且要确认我们是有能力推翻它的。 我的评价（我认为敌方看法是对的还是错的） 五、 建议类让步观点1观点2Remain superficial 流于肤浅，流于形式Students would intuitively draw a link between parents absence an
7、d indifference.结果：consequence, result, outcome, effect, ramification好的结果: positive, desirable, beneficial, promising坏的结果: negative, undesirable, detrimental, deleterious眼下的结果: short-term consequence长远的结果: long-term consequence导致xx的结果: lead to/cause/result in/contribute to/bring about/trigger/generat
8、e/invite段落写法：思维模版+对主题句的解释解释：事理解释 （推理过程）and/or 事例解释（紧扣事理（句子和词汇）狂用逻辑连接词Active Verbs:The writer is famous all over the world.The writer receives worldwide reputation.This policy is bad to the environment.This policy jeopardizes the environment,The poor are unfairly treated. The poor suffer unfair treat
9、ment.The writer becomes more and more famous.The reputation of this writer swells. (balloon, mushroom, snowball)This policy gets less and less importantThe importance of this policy pales (shrink, ebb, wane and wax)Most of his books confuse readersMost of his books elude readers.Success kept eluding
10、 me, yet my passion abides.What we are exploring now are in a lot of cases new fields, which our ancestors barely know. Therefore it is reasonable to conclude that the past achievements do not have a decisive influence on our exploration.Argument还原推理过程+结合Instruction事实性信息假设性信息结论性信息四类：1. 提出新证据用新证据正反评价
11、原argument例子：To begin with, despite the current evidence provided by the author, we would need additional evidence to better evaluate the claim that the new jazz club would have the local market all to itself. A survey, for example, which investigates the local transportation condition, would be of g
12、reat significance to help us assess the claim. If the survey reveals that the potential customers possess their own cars, or they have easy access to public transportation tools, then the authors claim might be overly optimistic. On the contrary, if the survey shows that the local transportation con
13、dition is extremely limited, then we tend to believe the authors claim, namely, the new jazz club would overshadow the old one in terms of distance and it would dominate the market.2. 中间那层的假设是否成立，如果不成立的话就xxx例子：To begin with, the argument is unconvincing due to the questionable stated assumption that
14、 the new jazz club would have the local market all to itself. Firstly, the assumption would be invalidated if the potential customers possess private vehicles or have easy access to public transportation tools. In addition, the possibility that the old jazz club is equipped with other attractions, s
15、uch as appealing music or agreeable environment, would also undermine the assumption. What is more, if it turns out that another more competitive jazz club is established in the near future, the proposed jazz club might lost its dominance. All of the previous scenarios would serve to weaken the auth
16、ors assumption concerning the potential market of the new jazz club, and once such an assumption is weakened, the conclusion of the argument is then open to doubt.3.问问题，给答案用答案来正反评价这个建议例子：To begin with, although the author passionately endorses the establishment of a new jazz club, we should raise mo
17、re questions to better evaluate the claim that new jazz club would have the local market all to itself. For instance, we need to know whether the potential customers possess their own cars or have easy access to public transportation tools. If it turns out that almost everyone owns a car, or public
18、transportation vehicles serve people well, then the authors claim would be thrown into doubt. On the contrary, if the author provides a negative answer to the previous question, then we are inclined to believe that people would assign more preference to the new jazz club and it would thus occupy the
19、 local market.4. 给其他的解释 例子：Although the writer of this argument attributes the relatively better state in Leeville to its relaxed pace of local life, before we examine other possible explanations, it remains hasty to regard the writers explanation as the only reasonable one. For instance, it is like
20、ly that Leeville peoples healthier state springs from more agreeable natural environment, which exerts a direct impact on peoples physical conditions; it is of equal possibility that harmonious interpersonal relationship in Leeville could have also contributed to local peoples healthier mental condi
21、tions; what is more, we cannot deny the scenario in which Leeville people are born healthier. To put it in other words, genetic factors could have also given rise to the fact mentioned in the argument. Unless the author manages to rule out all the previous possibilities, I argue that his interpretat
22、ion is one of the possible explanations, at best.句子整理中文1. 许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车，而车上可能已经满载乘客。2. 没有人能否认：教育是人生最重要的一方面。3. 在给出我的观点之前，我想看看双方的观点是重要的。4. 这个问题已经引起了广泛关注。5. 对大多数人来讲，退休以后，阅读或学习一项新技术已成为他们生活的中心和快乐的来源。6. 第二方面，失业的人似乎太多而又没有足够的工作岗位。7. 近些年，父母要求他们的孩子接受的教育呈增长的势头。8. 现在，父母亲留在家里照顾孩子而不愿过早返回工作岗位正成为
23、增加的趋势。9. 通过以上讨论，我们有理由相信在人们的生活和经济发展方面，基础建设比艺术文化项目发挥更大的作用。10. 我认为，首先应该看看学生在校园里可能遇到哪些问题。11. 许多年轻人一提到时尚服装就兴高采烈。他们似乎被时尚服装那多彩的面料，各种不同的款式所吸引。12. 同时，仍有许多持传统观点的人为全日制学校对孩子的学习发挥着及其重要的作用。13. 我认为，传统技术方法的消亡不一定是坏事，这是社会进步的自然结果。14. 全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。15. 听音乐能使我们放松。16. 做运动与健康息息相关。17. 现在，愈来愈多的人认识到法制教育的重要性。为了维护社会治安，我们没人
24、都应该接受法制教育。18. 由于人口的猛增或大量的人口流动（现代交通工具是这种流动相对容易）引发的种种问题也会对社会造成新的压力。19. 我的观点是，在我们的社会里，人人都有许多机遇，但是只有那些做好充分准备并且高度称职的人才能利用机遇达到目的。20. 阿德勒这句话很正确，教育不能随着毕业而结束。1. Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowde
25、d with a large number of passengers.2. No one can deny the fact that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life.3. Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.4. This issue has caused wide public concern.5. For people who want to adopt a
26、 healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.6. In the second place, there seem to be too many people without job and not enough job position.7. There is a growing tendency for parents to as
27、k their children to accept extra educational programs over the recent years.8. There is a growing tendency for parents these days to stay at home to look after their children instead of returning to work earlier.9. From what has been discussed above, it would be reasonable to believe that basic proj
28、ects play far more important role than artistic and cultural projects in peoples life and economic growth.10. As for me, it is essential to know, at first, what kind of problems young students possible would encounter on campus.11. Many young people always go into raptures at the merely mention of b
29、uying fashion clothes. And they seem to be attracted by colorful material, various styles of fashion clothes. There is nothing, they maintain, that cant be compared with fashion clothes. In fact, fashion clothes had become indispensable part of youngsters life.12. At the same time, there are still m
30、any people who live under the traditional day schools play an extremely important role in childrens study.13. As for me, the declining of traditional technology and methods is not a bad thing; it is the natural result of progress of society.14. It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispens
31、able to us.15. Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.16. Taking exercise is closely related to health.17. Today an increasing number of people have realized that law education is of great importance. In order to keep law and order, every one of us is supposed to get a law education.18. Addit
32、ional social stressed may also occur because of the population explosion or problems arising from mass migration movements-themselves made relatively easy nowadays by modern means of transport.19. In my opinion, there are plenty of opportunities for everyone in our society, but only those who are prepared adequately and qualified highly can make use of them to achieve purpose.20. Alder
