1、新东方写作补充讲义分享课堂范文:1. Due Attention Should be Paid to Spelling Theres no denying the fact that nowadays fewer and fewer students pay attention to their word-spelling. According to a recent survey, there is a dramatic increase in the number of students who can only imitate the pronunciation of a word bu
2、t be incapable of spelling it. Hence, students should attach great importance to the issue.The reason why students pay little attention to the spelling in my opinion can be discussed in the following three aspects. One of the major reasons is that fewer and fewer students need to write English essay
3、s. Another factor is attributed to students wide use of electronic devices such as e-dictionaries and computers. In this way, students no longer need to correct the words by themselves. Moreover, it is also because the present exams dont attach much importance to spelling. It means students need to
4、do nothing but the multiple choices skillfully to achieve good marks. Faced with the situation, we should take several measures to solve the problem. On one hand, universities have the responsibilities to modify ways of exams to more focus on spelling. Moreover, they should also work out effective w
5、ays to bring both teachers and students the awareness of the importance. On the other hand, students are supposed to enhance the awareness of creating a green campus so that they will instinctively remember to turn off the tap when they finish washing. Only in this way can we expect to have a green
6、campus.2. Study abroad原文:I think it is good to study abroad, we can get a better education. We can get some knowledge. We can also know a new culture and make different friends. We can feel happy to play together.修改后:I think studying abroad exerts positive influence on people because we can receive
7、better education and acquire different knowledge. Its obvious that we will get exposed to a new culture, which will lay a solid foundation for future work. Besides, we can make different friends with whom we feel happy.3. Pirated Products原文:The primary reason is attributed to a great many of people
8、would rather buy the pirated products in that their prices are much lower than the original ones. Another factor lies in the law is still not perfect, the government lacks the corresponding legal foundation. 修改后:The primary reason is attributed to the low price. A great many of people would rather b
9、uy the pirated products because they are much cheaper than the authorized ones. Another cause lies in the fact that the law is still not perfect. In this way, the government lacks the corresponding legal foundation. 4. Travel abroad1. 近年来X市有越来越多的人选择出境旅游。2. 出现这种现象的原因。3. 这种现象可能产生的影响。As revealed from t
10、he bar chart, great changes took place in the past decade in the number of people traveling abroad. In the year of 1995, about 10,000 people went abroad for travelling while the number climbed to 40,000 in the year of 2000. In the year of 2005, the number soared to 130,000. Personally, the sharp inc
11、rease in people traveling abroad can be discussed in two aspects. For one thing, theres no denying the fact that people become well-off with the rapid development of economy so that they can afford the traveling cost. For another, theres a growing hope among people to enlarge their view by traveling
12、 abroad.On the whole, I hold that traveling exerts positive influence on us because it enables us to have more opportunities to not only enjoy the attractive scenery, but also get exposed to the great culture of a nation. Therefore, our view and scope of knowledge will be broadened to a great extent
13、.范文:1. Low Carbon LifePresently, a new lifestyle called low carbon life is spreading every corner of the world. People believe that if they consume less resource, our living condition will be better. The appearance of this trend is mainly due to the worsening environment on earth. Human beings are e
14、xhausting the energy resources on earth. At the same time, we emit the greenhouse gases in our daily actions, which has changed the climate of the earth and led to a series of damaging consequences. Therefore, its everyones responsibility to stop their destructive action. On one hand, the government
15、 should advocate a no-car day every week, because cars not only cause serious air pollution but also consume energy. On the other hand, citizens should be encouraged to take public transportation, or just walk or ride a bike. Besides, we had better not use disposable plastic bags any more. Moreover,
16、 we should try every means to save in our daily life. We ought to turn out the lights the moment we leave a room, turn off the tap in time, and reuse our textbook and so on. 2. Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling Nowadays, students attach less importance to the spelling of words in the process
17、 of English study. This phenomenon greatly influences students writing and brings on worries among teachers.There are possibly three reasons contributing to this phenomenon. First, exam-oriented education makes the students pay less attention to spelling. Second, some teachers should also be respons
18、ible for it because they dont emphasize the importance of spelling during teaching. Besides, some students are too lazy to recite words.Since spelling is one of the most important factors in English study, due attention should be given to it. As for me, I think, first, exams should be modified to ad
19、d some factors into it, which would help students to pay more attention to spelling. Then, schools should also set effective mechanisms to help teachers as well as the students to realize the importance. Finally, for students themselves, they can, through other ways, make themselves be interested in
20、 word spelling. Only in these ways can we realize the importance of spelling and make improvement.3. Create a Green Campus“Green campus” is, to some extent, a relatively new concept to us. It not only means creating a green environment on campus, but also refers to that the students should be educat
21、ed and have an environmental sense in their mind. Of course, this concept is very important for the students because it sets goals toward the future of the world.The young generation is under the burden of severe environmental problems and the hopes of environmental improvement are lying in them. Th
22、erefore, campus plays a more important role in educating the young generation. The creation of “Green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in various environmental protection activities; most importantly, students will be educated to take environmental problems seriously as their own
23、 mission and responsibility. Under such stimulations, students may grasp the chance to learn every necessary course for the harmonious and sustainable development of the world.To bring “green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken. First, based on its education function, campus
24、 should bring the theory of “sustainable development” into classrooms, set environmental management rules and conduct environmental education activities. Second, campus also needs to strengthen its ties with the society, tries to communicate with parents and experts so as to ensure that students cou
25、ld have a better participation in the practical activities. Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could “green campus” work smoothly and bring benefit to peoples well-beings.4. Recreational activitiesThere are more and more kinds of recreational activities with the fast development of the soci
26、ety. I think the recreational activities have many good ways, and I have many reasons to support that.First, the college students would have more opportunities to make friends. Second, they can have rest in the recreational activities, which is beneficial not only for their health, but also for thei
27、r making-friends. Whats more, the recreational activity, the way to offer relaxations after a laborious day, can help people to relieve stress. For example, I often go with my roommates to play basketball which I like most. After the game, I always feel good. Just as every coin has two sides, there
28、are also some bad sides of recreational activities. If we reduce ourselves to them, they may affect our studies, and thus bring harm to us.As far as Im concerned, recreational activities can exert both positive and negative influence on people. Only if we make right ways to attend can it do good to
29、us. 5. Studying abroadAt present, many students study abroad and many others are making preparations for that. According to statistics, about 8,000 college graduates go abroad to pursue further study each year.Studying abroad can bring us lots of benefits. Firstly, it is important for us to get an a
30、dvanced education or training in our major. Through having access to some special equipment, we can acquire some knowledge which is not available at home. Besides, one can know a new culture.However, there are also some problems with studying abroad. For example, some students wont return after fini
31、shing their study, which is a great loss to our motherland.Im an English major student and I plan to study in America in the future. On one hand, I can develop my language proficiency in English speaking surroundings; on the other hand, I can widen my horizons by seeing the world.6. Fake DiplomaRece
32、ntly, the problem of fake diploma has been brought into public focus. It is oftenreported that someone was caught with a fake diploma in the personnel market. The advertisements of selling fake diploma can often be found.The reasons for the repeated occurrence of fake diploma are not difficult to get. Firstly, the prospective employers put too much emphasis on the job applicants educational background rather than their practical abilities. Secondly, some peoples lack of access to higher education also contributes to the problem.The appearance of fake diploma i