1、专题06 书面表达第01期届高三英语百所名校好题速递分项解析汇编解析版2017届高考模拟试题分类汇编（1）之书面表达【湖北省部分重点中学2017届高三上学期起点考试】假定你是高三学生李华，从网上获悉一家国际青少年志愿者组织正在全球招募暑期志愿者。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。主要内容如下： 1写信目的； 2自我介绍； 3希望获准。注意： 1词数100左右； 2文章的结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir or Madam, _ With all my best regards.Yours sincerely, Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir or Mad
2、am, Im writing this letter to apply for the job as a volunteer that you have advertised on the Internet. In my opinion, not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience, but also it can help those in need live better and become more confident. I will graduate from senior high s
3、chool in June. In the past, I took part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience. My interest and skill in English, communication and teamwork contribute to my application for the job. I would appreciate an interview at your convenience. Im looking forward to he
4、aring from you in the future. With all my best regards. Yours sincerely,Li Hua【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语apply for申请；in ones opinion在某人看来；contribute to有助于；look forward to 盼望着；In my opinion, not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience, but also it can help those in need live better
5、and become more confident.这个句子运用到部分倒装；In the past, I took part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience.这个句子运用到in which引导的定语从句；考点： 提纲类作文 【广西桂林市桂林中学2017届高三8月月考】假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国中学生Alex Nelson的来信。作为姊妹学校的交流生，他两个月前访问过你校，听说有个“六艺俱乐部（Liuyi Club）的学生社团。希望进一步了解有关情况。请根
6、据以下要点，给他写一封信，介绍俱乐部的情况。1 成立时间：20152 六艺：中国传统的文化艺术，如书法、音乐、绘画等3 俱乐部宗旨：宣传中国文化、交友 4 经常组织的活动： 中国书法、绘画竞赛 免费中国书法课程 中国文化讲座 学生社团：Student society中国书法：Chinese calligraphy注意：1词数100左右; 2可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯 3开头语已为你写好 Dear Nelson, I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about Liuyi Club._【
7、答案】I was so p1eased to hear from you and am writing to tel1 you something about Liuyi Club. Founded in 2015, Liuyi Club is a student society on Chinese traditional culture, especially the Chinese calligraphy. “Luiyi” means “the six arts”, a general term referring to a variety of the traditional Chin
8、ese arts.Since 2010, Liuyi Club has organized various activities aiming at promoting traditional Chinese arts. Some of the regularly held events include Chinese calligraphy and paining competition, free Chinese calligraphy courses for students in the school, lectures on Chinese culture and tradition
9、s.Liuyi Club is a place for students from different classes to make friends who have common interests in the Chinese arts. Through various activities, members enjoy rich opportunities to improve communication and teamwork abilities.【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语hear from收到某人的来信；a variety of许多；make friends交朋友；ha
10、ve common interests in在某方面有共同的兴趣；Founded in 2015, Liuyi Club is a student society on Chinese traditional culture, especially the Chinese calligraphy.这个句子运用到非谓语动词 ；Since 2010, Liuyi Club has organized various activities aiming at promoting traditional Chinese arts.这个句子中运用到现在完成时；Liuyi Club is a place
11、for students from different classes to make friends who have common interests in the Chinese arts.这个句子who引导定语从句；考点： 提纲类作文【江西省丰城中学2017届高三上学期第一次段考】书面表达(满分25分)假定你是中学生李华。高三将是辛苦忙碌的一年，不管自己还是父母都会很辛苦。每个家长都是望子成龙的，处在这一重要的学习阶段，父母会对你的生活学习倍加关心。现在请你按照以下内容要点给自己的父母写一封感谢信。内容要点：1. 感谢父母这么多年来无微不至的关心；2. 近段时间自己的学习情况及取得的进
12、步，自己会继续努力，希望父母放心；3. 高三过后一定多帮父母做家务。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3. 开头和结尾已给出。Dear parents,_Love from,Your son【答案】Dear parents, The hardest time of my life is coming, and I know that you both are very worried about my studies and my life. I can say nothing but thanks to you on this special occasion
13、, because words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the care you have shown me over the past years. These days I have been studying hard and have performed to the best of my abilities in the test. Ill try my best to accomplish my assignment in the days to come. Please set your m
14、inds at rest. After the college entrance examination, I intend to help you do some housework, which I have seldom done before. And I want to learn to cook in order to prepare a dinner personally for you both.My dear parents, everything is going well with me. Do relax!Love from,Your son【解析】【亮点说明】范文中运
15、用一些常见的短语worry about担心；thanks to 由于；intend to do打算做某事；in order to do 为了；I know that you both are very worried about my studies and my life这个句子运用到that引导的宾语从句；After the college entrance examination, I intend to help you do some housework, which I have seldom done before.这个句子运用到which引导的非限制性定语从句；考点： 提纲类作
16、文 【湖北省沙市中学2017届高三上学期第二次考试】书面表达（满分25分） 假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发贴，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。 1表达给她提供帮助的意愿； 2说明你能胜任辅导的理由； 3给出讲好普通话的两点建议；4提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意：1词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Hi Sharon,This is Li Xia I learned from your post that you want to improve your Man
17、darin 【答案】Dear Sharon, This is Li Xia, I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.I felt honored to have the chance to help you with your Mandarin learning. Im good at speaking standard Mandarin. Ive been a broadcaster in the school broadcasting station for years. When it comes
18、to how to speak fluent Mandarin, I suggest that you learn a bunch of pronunciation rules first, which are quite different from the English ones. Another suggestion is to practice speaking. As one saying goes. “Practice makes perfect.” However, my English is just OK and I have many problems with my s
19、tudy. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to study English. I believe we both can make much progress with each others help.Looking forward to your reply soon! Yours, Li Xia【亮点说明】本文采用常用的三段式，要点齐全，布局安排合理，层次分明，使用高级词汇、短语和高级句式。I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandar
20、in.句中使用定语从句；I felt honored to have the chance to help you with your Mandarin learning.动词不定式作定语；When it comes to how to speak fluent Mandarin,当谈到-的时候，是固定句式；I suggest that you learn a bunch of pronunciation rules first, which are quite different from the English ones. suggest后面的宾语从句中运用虚拟语气（should）+动词原
21、形，同时句中还用了非限制性定语从句；As one saying goes. “Practice makes perfect.”as引导非限制性定语从句，同时句中使用谚语；I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to study English.宾语从句体现句中。考点：考查电子邮件式话题作文【湖北省襄阳市第五中学2017届高三上学期开学考试】书面表达（满分25分）你校学生会将举行一场高三年级英语话剧比赛，请你以校学生会李明的名义给外教Wilson Smith写-封信请其当裁判并说明话剧比赛事宜。应包括以下内容： 1每班限报一个话
22、剧，人数不超过10人，不少于2人；2话剧表演必须用英语表达，时长不超过半小时；3话剧内容必须思想健康，适合中学生观看； 4时间：12月10日，地点：校大礼堂。注意：1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Mr.Smith,How is everything going on? _We are looking forward to your replay. Thank you. Yours sincerely,Li Ming【答案】Dear Mr. Smith, How is everything going on? May we hav
23、e the honor to invite you to be the judge of our coming play contest? We would really appreciate it if your answer is YES. The Students Union is going to hold an English play contest among Senior 3 students on December 10th. Each class can only present only one play， in which the number of participa
24、nts should be limited between 2 and 10 students. All plays must be presented in English and finished within half an hour. In addition, the content of the plays must be mentally healthy and suitable for Senior students. The location will be in the school hall. It is really a good chance to practice s
25、tudents oral English as well as to show their talents. We really hope that you can give us some help so that our judgment will be more objective.We are looking forward to your replay. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Li Ming【解析】试题分析：你校学生会将举行一场高三年级英语话剧比赛，请你以校学生会李明的名义给外教Wilson Smith写-封信请其当裁判并说明话剧比赛事宜。应包括以下
26、内容： 1每班限报一个话剧，人数不超过10人，不少于2人；2话剧表演必须用英语表达，时长不超过半小时；3话剧内容必须思想健康，适合中学生观看；时间：12月10日，地点：校大礼堂。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。【亮点说明】文章段落清晰，结构严谨，布局合理，句中使用高级句子。We would really apprecia
27、te it if your answer is YES. would really appreciate it if含条件句的固定句式用于其中；Each class can only present only one play， in which the number of participants should be limited between 2 and 10 students.非限制性定语从句和被动语态完美结合；All plays must be presented in English and finished within half an hour.含情态动词的被动语态；We r
28、eally hope that you can give us some help so that our judgment will be more objective.宾语从句和目的状语从句在同句体现。考点：考查书信式话题作文 【湖北省襄阳市第四中学2017届高三八月第一周周考】书面表达（满分25分） 假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛,请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象,写一篇演讲稿,陈述你的观点。演讲稿的主要内容应包括： 1. 认为同学们不必为此苦恼； 2. 希望能够体谅父母的苦衷； 3. 建议与父母进行交流和沟通。 注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。【答案】Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but theres no nee
