1、中考英语作文中考英语作文复习13页中考专题：写作1、评分标准(以2016年中考作文为例)2、历届中考作文题汇总（03-10）3、作文评析4、作文题预测5、自制模板：素材分类，积累好词好句好观点6、常见作文题汇总1、评分标准（一、）要求：初中毕业生要求能够对人物、事物、事件和场所等作简单的描述和议论。因此，英语写话不仅要求单词拼写正确，用词得当，句子符号语法规范，而且要求句与句之间逻辑连贯，主题突出。 英语评分标准由三部分组成：内容（7分）、语言（8分）、组织结构（3分）。其中，内容评分采用踩点法，也就是说你所写的内容涉及到问题或提示的内容，就可获得内容分；反之，则可能偏题、离题。语言方面要求句
2、式规范，表达准确，脉络清晰；如果整个语篇语言通顺，意思连贯，逻辑性强，又有几个好词好句，就可以得高分。（二、）示例：2016年中考作文评分 （2016）Writing（作文共18分）Write at least 60 words about the topic “Im a member of_”.（以“我是.的一员”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示：你可以作为任意兴趣小组或社团的一员，或者作为家庭、班级、社区的一员，写出你的经历、感受等。Use the following points as reference:Are you glad to be a member of
3、?What do you do in it?How do you feel as such a member?1、简要分析作文标题为“Im a member of”，这样的考题让每个考生都有话可说。题目包含5张图片提示，分别代表家庭、歌舞俱乐部、爱护动物者社团、自然科学竞赛社团题目中蕴含“责任意识和公民意识”的两纲内容，与“往年的考题以强调自我感受居多”不同，今年考题引导学生思考我可以为他人、为集体付出些什么。在写作过程中一定要注意提示“一定要表达具体是什么的成员”，根据几个guided questions,最好能在开头表达是否开心加入此团体，后面紧接着描述原因即在作为一员主要工作是什么，最后
4、再来一个作为成员的感受作为总结，这样整个作文的结构就清楚了。但想获得很高分，还要尽量避免语法拼写等错误，写出一些比较出彩的复合句，这就需要同学平时勤练基本功了。2、写话评分标准：（仅供参考）作文共18分，其中内容7分，语言8分，组织结构3分。(1)内容： （本项扣分总和不得超过7分。）7分 内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。46分 内容基本切题，意思大致连贯，表达基本清楚，但不够完整。23分 内容不够切题，意思不够连贯，表达不够清楚，离题目要求较远。01分 文不对题，表达不清。(2)语言：（本项扣分总和不得超过8分。）拼写每错扣0.5分,同一错误不重复扣分。语法扣分标准同 1。标点符号、大小
5、写错误每2处扣0.5分，但整卷此项错误的扣分总和不得超过1分。(3)词数词数不足30个者，给分以8分为限；词数不足40个者，给分以11分为限；词数不足50个者，给分以14分为限；(以上3点应结合内容和语言各项综合考虑。)词数在5059个之间者，每少5个扣0.5分；只写出个别单词、词不成句者，则给0分。（4）组织结构：（本项分四档给分： 3， 2， 1， 0）具体描述（供参考）：内容和语言两项总分达1415分者，内容充实，不写废话，主题突出；上下文连贯，用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误；词汇、句型和句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给足3分。上述各项总体表现略逊色者可给2分。内容和
6、语言两项总分在1213分者，若文中确有好句型或表达用语，可给1分。内容和语言两项总分在11分及以下者，或通篇句型、句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语言错误，亦不给分。（3、）写作步骤： 1、列提纲：列提纲包括（1）审题，确定文章的体裁和篇章结构，先后顺序以及侧重点（总-分；总-分-总）；（2）选材，选择最能说明主题且自己有话可说的材料，忌眼高手低选择深奥、偏僻、复杂的材料；（3）选写作方法，如举例，因果，并列，递进，正反对比，对照，时序等。 2、根据提纲写作，注意选词和句型，过渡句，衔接词。 3、检查：查词汇；查句型；查要点；查文采；查拼写训练方法：1、遣词：在正确的基础上选择具体的、高级的词汇。
7、2、造句：使用正确的、熟练的句型。恰当使用复杂句。能恰当表意的习语、谚语。使用连接词增加文章的逻辑性和条理性。3、布局谋篇：主题句简洁明了，中间句丰富多彩，结束句首位呼应，提升主题。2、历届中考作文题汇总(03) To Be a Lovely Shanghainese(做可爱的上海人)Suggested questions:Why should we be lovely Shanghainese?What should or shouldnt a lovely Shanghainese do?What are you doing to be a lovely Shanghainese?（04
8、）Write at least 60 words on the topic Leaving School(以“毕业时分”为题写话。词数不少于60个，标点符号不占格，所给要点仅供参考)：Suggested points: old school life teacher(s) and schoolmate(s) future plan（05)Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Growing pains and gains”. The picture below are for your reference only. ( 以“成长
9、的烦恼与快乐”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。以下图片仅供参考。) （06）(共14分) Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I Have a Dream”. ( 以“我有一个梦想”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)（ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Sentence patterns for reference （以下句型仅供参考）My dream is to be / to do / to goI enjoy / like / preferTo make m
10、y dream come true, IIf my dream comes true, （07）Writing (作文): (共16分) Write at least 60 words on the topic “ Things I Hate to Do”. （以“我不喜欢”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文， 标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点）。What are the things that you hate to do?What do you hate doing most? Why? (Give at least
11、two reasons. )（08）Writing (作文): (共16分) 110.Write at least 60 words about the topic “Love around me”.(以“我身边的爱”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Use the following points as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点） Is there any love around you ? How do you feel when you get love from him/her/them? What are you going to do to show y
12、our love?（09）Writing（作文）：（共18分）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school. （以“想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Use the following points as a reference.（以下内容仅供参考）What do you want to do for your school?Why do you want to do it?How ar
13、e you going to do it?（10）Writing（作文）：（共18分）99. Write at least 60 words about the topicIm proud of myself.（以“我为自己感到自豪”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Use the following points as a reference. （以下内容仅供参考） What kind of person are you? What makes you proud of youself? (Given an e
14、xample/examples.) Why are you proud of yourself?3、作文评析：My Favourite ThingsOf all my possessions， a walkman is my favourite thing. My father bought it for me as my birthday present last year. Since then， it has always been with me. At home， when I wake up， I turn it on to listen to English tapes to l
15、earn English. Thanks to it， I have always got good marks in English. After finishing my homework in the evening， before going to bed I always listen to some light music. On my way to school， I take it with me on the bus and listen to English or songs. I have got a lot of pleasure from it. I like it
16、very much. And I will never drop it. How to be happy every day It is important for every one to be happy every day. If you are happy every day, you can enjoy yourself all the time. But how to be happy every day? In my opinion, one should not be so greedy and ask for too much. Never make yourself wor
17、k without resting. Be sure to relax yourself if you feel tired . And never be too hard on yourself. Learn to smile and face your life in a healthy way. And something more , never be sad when you are in trouble.What is beauty in your mind？ Nowadays some people tend to think that they own beauty if th
18、ey have a good looking. They are not satisfied with their appearance. They spend much money taking a kind of operation. Can beauty really be man-made？ If so， everybody can get beauty. As a result， there is no beauty at all. Many heroes dont have beautiful surface. However， their beautiful images oft
19、en come to our minds. Their beauty comes from their contributions to the society. Dont be eager to judge whether a person is beautiful or not without a thorough understanding of him. A beautiful person is not the one with a good looking, but with a broad and kind heart. Good looking is pleasant whil
20、e spiritual beauty is more important. As an old saying goes， “ Virtue is fairer than beauty. ” If you have a kind heart，you own real beauty.Things I hate to do（07中考） I like going on net, going fishing , watching a football match and so on. But still there are many things I hate to do in my life. I h
21、ate to go shopping with my mother. She always asks me to go shopping with her. At the supermarket she always purchases a lot of things for me which I dont need at all. Its a waste of money. And I hate to go to the bookstores with my father at weekends. He always says to me , “You should not only rea
22、d these books but also go into those books. ” As a matter of fact. I dont like reading these books or those ones. I just want to read my own favourite books. I am looking forward to being myself in my life.English is important. There are millions of people learning English in the world. They think i
23、t important to learn English well. Its true that English is very important in our daily life. English is widely used all over the world. English hasbecome an international language. It is used in many international conferences. And something more, if you know English well, you can travel around the
24、world without being understood. And Most valuable books, newspapers and magazines are written in English. If you want to get more information from these books, you musrt learn English well. Learn English is of great importance. A good command of English depends on a lot of practice. Lets come on . L
25、earn English, use English and Enjoy your English!Learn to smile（1）If you wan to be happy every day , you should learn to smile. First when you are successful in doing something, you can be happy and smile a lot to show that you are very pleased with yourself. Second never be sad when you are in trou
26、ble. Be sure of yourself and you can overcome the difficulties. Third, if you can share something with others you will be sure to smile in your heart. So be sure to know the importance of smiling in our life. Lets learn to smile and enjoy our life.Learn to smile (2）Smile is an attitude to life. It c
27、an make your life full of sunshine. In our life, there may be something unpleasant. For example, when you fail in an exam, or another time, you are miss understood by your friends, they make you feel bad. Then what will you do?Why not learn to smile? Smiling to yourself can bring back your confidenc
28、e. Sometimes, the biggest enemy is yourself. That is to say, sometimes, you are beaten by yourself. We should also learn to smile to others. It will help us to get close to others. So, smile to others and to yourself can make the whole world warm and happy.4、作文题预测1. 环境保护篇Low carbon lifestyleWe can d
29、o a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life. First, wed better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surel
30、y benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.2. 网络科技篇（手机、电脑等）（1
31、.）随着互联网的发展和普及，网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了；相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了，比如*网，京东商城等；但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢? 请写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。参考范文：We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days. Some students think its very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet. The shops on
32、Internet，for example , are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. Whats more, we neednt wait in a queue.However, some students disagreed with them. We cant see the things while we are shopping. So we are not sure whether they are good or not. Besides, we cant enjoy the happiness of sh
